Do Not Exclude Poetry

Out of curiosity, I looked up the website of a writers’ group to which I used to belong (from 1996 to about 2007). They still seem to be meeting, but one detail surprised me. They no longer critique poetry in the group. I know good reasons why that is not good.

Many people don’t care for most poetry. Most modern poetry annoys me; I consider it whiny, humanist drivel and most of it fits into the category of “trying too hard”. Many of of the free verse poets I’ve encountered were only doing free verse because they did not have the skill or work ethic to do structured poetry, so the lack of form was a cop out from doing the work.

Those problems with poetry are why more people should write poetry and should get a thorough critique from writers who are not “poetry people”. Good poetry does take a lot of work; it is an exercise of words, images, and meter.

Compare writing formal poetic structures with weight lifting for football players. At no time during football does a player lay on a bench to raise and lower a weighted bar, but every football player engages in that activity as part of the training. Weightlifting makes the player stronger. Writing structured poetry makes a writer stronger.

Writing is a form of communication. Poetry must also be thought of this way. The poet puts words to paper to communicate an idea to the reader. Whether structured or free verse, the reader must be able to receive the message without the poet being present.

This is where the group critique helps. In an effective writers’ group, the author being critiqued listens, possibly taking notes, but never speaking. The other members discuss the work as though the author is absent, referring to the author in third person or just as “the author”. Doing this helps the group members speak more freely and prevents the urge for the author to defend the work. The author sees exactly which parts of the message were received by the readers and, hopefully, understands which parts were missed.

By reviewing the critique, the author/poet can revise the work to make their message more clear. With experience, the author builds a talent for communication so their audience will miss less of the message.

Again, poetry can be a bit abstract, or just flaky, and a good critique from friendly but honest group members can really help. For someone serious about their poetry, this is invaluable. They can develop beyond “why does life have to suck so much?” dirges to poignant little descriptions of the beauty of aggregate in sidewalk composed of clever but simple words. On the other hand, if the poet just wants to identify as poet to inflict their nonsense on others, a couple of good critiques may discourage them.

If you have a group, I hope you will critique poetry. Whether you have a group or not, I hope you will experiment with poetry. Just so you know such things exist, I hope you find one of the truly awesome poems by a great poet and that the poem has an effect on you.

A Long Semester in Fall 2018

I am starting to see a pattern. Fall of 2017 was almost as bad. In my day job, I teach software development and databases. This fall, one of my courses, the technology changed while I was teaching it. All of my preparations, my examples and so forth were invalid. This really cut into my writing time.

As I struggle to get back to my passions, I find a barrier. It is as though the busy beavers of my day-to-day have built a dam of daily responsibilities and mundane tasks. The creative flow, now blocked, built up behind it, building pressure at the same time.

Now I have to carefully disassemble the dam, piece by piece, to let the pressure out in a controlled manner until a healthy balance has been restored. My fear, though, is that I will pull out some important structural member, allowing a flash flood of creativity that displaces my daily tasks and the ability to pay bills they provide.

Hopefully, I will be able to get back into the swing of things and create some stuff. I also need to get back to promoting my novel, Cordell’s Rebellion.

One of my former students has asked if she can provide cover art for my next novel. She is a good illustrator, so I am excited to see what she comes up with. As a matter of propriety, I had to insist that I pay her for the work (she wanted to give it as a gift) because she is a former student. I will also make sure that she gets proper credit for the cover art.

The other side of that is the imperative to complete the second novel. The first draft is about four-fifths done. I need to finish the first draft, diagram the crap out of it to look for structural flaws, do all the grammar and spelling checks, and complete a few more drafts. That shouldn’t take too many more lifetimes. If I really crack down, it should be easy. I just need to do it. I also need to keep up with daily responsibilities.

I’ve always heard it said that good writers don’t find time to write, they make time to write. That is going to have to be my way of doing things. I have to shoehorn time to write and be generally creative. If I don’t the rest of life will take it over.